Fantastic Hamza, your sentence choices and word choices are great. Writing about how the character felt helps to put your reader right there. Well done.
Ms McGrath (Team 100WC), Australia
Hello Hamza!
You have written a super 100WC about the Autumn leaves…
It has a lovely twist, after you’d built it up in such a scary way! well done for thinking of this super short story and for using such great descriptions, with similes and ly words!
Fantastic Hamza, your sentence choices and word choices are great. Writing about how the character felt helps to put your reader right there. Well done.
Ms McGrath (Team 100WC), Australia
Hello Hamza!
You have written a super 100WC about the Autumn leaves…
It has a lovely twist, after you’d built it up in such a scary way! well done for thinking of this super short story and for using such great descriptions, with similes and ly words!
Well done Hamza. I like how you created suspense in your story. A good choice of words.
Thank you