Hello Prithikaa, I really liked the ending to this story. Instead of just waking up and realising it was all a dream, you used a much more sophisticated version.
You manage to evoke a claustrophobic atmosphere in your writing from the moment you write about fear. You use short sentences to great effect. One feels the menace, then, suddenly it dissipates with the realisation of dreaming.
Very good work, keep writing.
Sarah Team 100wc
Montpellier, France
Hello Prithikaa, I really liked the ending to this story. Instead of just waking up and realising it was all a dream, you used a much more sophisticated version.
You manage to evoke a claustrophobic atmosphere in your writing from the moment you write about fear. You use short sentences to great effect. One feels the menace, then, suddenly it dissipates with the realisation of dreaming.
Very good work, keep writing.
Sarah Team 100wc
Montpellier, France
Thank you very much for your comment.
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