You’ve included some wonderful descriptive phrases here to help me get a picture in my mind’s eye. You’re missing some punctuation which makes it hard to read at times.
Mrs M
Hey Robert,
This was an exciting and action-packed read. It would be easier to read if you added in some punctuation but can’t wait to see what you write next.
Hi Robert,
You’ve included some wonderful descriptive phrases here to help me get a picture in my mind’s eye. You’re missing some punctuation which makes it hard to read at times.
Mrs M
Hey Robert,
This was an exciting and action-packed read. It would be easier to read if you added in some punctuation but can’t wait to see what you write next.
Mr Geary Team 100