Hi Robert,
This was another great read; I can see you’ve been influenced by current events but then introduce a twist at the end that leaves me desperate to know what happens next. My only advice would be to edit before you publish.
Hope you’re well. Best wishes Mrs Moore
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Hi Robert,
This was another great read; I can see you’ve been influenced by current events but then introduce a twist at the end that leaves me desperate to know what happens next. My only advice would be to edit before you publish.
Hope you’re well.
Best wishes
Mrs Moore