I hope you and your family are keeping well and safe during this lockdown.
This was another fantastic piece of writing that you should feel proud of. You used the prompt in an original way and conveyed your message to your reader in a clear way; it’s not always easy to tell the truth but it’s always better to be honest. Next time watch your tenses, we use the past perfect to talk about the past of the past. Well done Shayaan, I enjoyed reading this and am intrigued to know what happened before.
Hi Shayaan,
I hope you and your family are keeping well and safe during this lockdown.
This was another fantastic piece of writing that you should feel proud of. You used the prompt in an original way and conveyed your message to your reader in a clear way; it’s not always easy to tell the truth but it’s always better to be honest. Next time watch your tenses, we use the past perfect to talk about the past of the past. Well done Shayaan, I enjoyed reading this and am intrigued to know what happened before.
Keep up the great work and stay safe.
Mrs Moore