Hi Furqaan,
Hope you and your family are doing ok during these strange times.
Thank you for entering the challenge this week; I loved your tale of an epic quest. You made great use of emotive language to draw me in. Next time watch your use of pronouns as some of them are a little confused, proof-reading will help with that.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
Hi Furqaan,
Hope you and your family are doing ok during these strange times.
Thank you for entering the challenge this week; I loved your tale of an epic quest. You made great use of emotive language to draw me in. Next time watch your use of pronouns as some of them are a little confused, proof-reading will help with that.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
Well done on a great story. I really enjoyed the mystery around the riddle.