Hi Yukta, This was an interesting entry into the challenge this week. I love all your whimsical descriptions but that somehow didn’t seem to work with your karate championship. Watch your tenses , you’re jumping between past and present.
Mrs M
Hi Mrs Moore,
Thanks for your comments. I have incorporated your comments and sharing it for your review and approval to enter ‘100 Word Challenge’.
Thanks Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar, 6A.
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Hi Yukta,
This was an interesting entry into the challenge this week. I love all your whimsical descriptions but that somehow didn’t seem to work with your karate championship. Watch your tenses , you’re jumping between past and present.
Mrs M
Hi Mrs Moore,
Thanks for your comments.
I have incorporated your comments and sharing it for your review and approval to enter ‘100 Word Challenge’.
Thanks
Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar, 6A.