Hi Yukta, This is much improved and a joy to read; you’ve conjured up some wonderful imagery to create an idyllic atmosphere. Next time watch your use of articles. Well done
Hello Mrs Moore, Thank you for your lovely comments about my writing. I will take care of the usage of the articles in my writings.
Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar,6A.
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Hi Yukta,
This is much improved and a joy to read; you’ve conjured up some wonderful imagery to create an idyllic atmosphere. Next time watch your use of articles. Well done
Hello Mrs Moore,
Thank you for your lovely comments about my writing. I will take care of the usage of the articles in my writings.
Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar,6A.