Wow what a scary ending Arif! Some love descriptive language to draw me in but you really need to read your work back to check it makes sense before you publish.
Well done Arif. A thought killer ship – that is an amazing idea!
I like the image you have created of the size of the ship.
My only thought for improvement would be to always check your writing before you post it, it’s really easy to make errors when typing (typos) and you have a few here.
Keep on writing.
Wow what a scary ending Arif! Some love descriptive language to draw me in but you really need to read your work back to check it makes sense before you publish.
Well done Arif. A thought killer ship – that is an amazing idea!
I like the image you have created of the size of the ship.
My only thought for improvement would be to always check your writing before you post it, it’s really easy to make errors when typing (typos) and you have a few here.
Keep on writing.