100 Word Challenge part 2 edited By Andrei

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5 Responses to 100 Word Challenge part 2 edited By Andrei

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Andrei,
    I can see you’ve edited this and improved it. Some lovely description here. Remember to check your verbs are in the correct tense.
    Mrs M

  2. Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) says:

    Hello Andrei, what an adventure it would be to go to the North Pole in a bus! Some word choices help bring your story to life: mysterious, politely, opportunity and settled. Great work in editing and improving your writing. This is an excellent skill that all writers need. Well done.

  3. Heidi (Team 100WC, New Zealand) says:

    Kia ora Andrei. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. I especially like how you have presented the reader with questions. It drew me in and I wanted to find out what happened next! Keep up the super writing Andrei.

  4. Heidi (Team 100WC, New Zealand) says:

    Kia ora Andrei. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. I especially like how you have presented the reader with questions. It drew me in and made me want to find out what happens next! Keep up the super writing Andrei.

  5. argia says:

    Thank you!
    Andrei

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