The adventure by Spandana Singh

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4 Responses to The adventure by Spandana Singh

  1. sings says:

    Mrs Moore, this is my edited piece.

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Spandana,
    You might want to have a quick check before I enter you.
    Mrs M

  3. Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) says:

    Hello Singh, I see that you have edited your piece of writing. This is a great skill to develop. I liked how descriptive your story was, as it provided me with a visual image. You have used some really good adjectives: gigantic, glistening, luminous and dangerous. Your last two sentences made me wonder what was going to happen next. Well done.

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