I hope you’re keeping well.
I can imagine just how infuriating it would be to have an unknown noise disturb you, I’m only sorry your brother punched you in the tummy; that’s not very nice. You used the narrator’s voice well to make me understand how you felt. Are/our: what’s the difference?
Hi Brindan
I enjoyed your 100WC this week. You used the prompt to create an interesting idea. Taking your brother along to help was clever. Keep up the great work.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Hello Brindan,
I hope you’re keeping well.
I can imagine just how infuriating it would be to have an unknown noise disturb you, I’m only sorry your brother punched you in the tummy; that’s not very nice. You used the narrator’s voice well to make me understand how you felt. Are/our: what’s the difference?
Mrs M
Hi Brindan
I enjoyed your 100WC this week. You used the prompt to create an interesting idea. Taking your brother along to help was clever. Keep up the great work.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand