Good Romasa, you used lots of action to draw me into your story; I want to know who is flying the plane and what happens next. Remember to use the app to help you with your spelling so as not to confuse your reader.
Well done Romasa for entering this week’s 100wc. You have used the picture well to create a short story. Maybe next time you complete a 100wc you could try to use some speech marks; this will make your writing even better than it already is!
Good Romasa, you used lots of action to draw me into your story; I want to know who is flying the plane and what happens next. Remember to use the app to help you with your spelling so as not to confuse your reader.
I liked the part when you done a question at the end. who do you think was driving the plain. but next time fix your spellings but it was amazing.
By amina
Well done Romasa for entering this week’s 100wc. You have used the picture well to create a short story. Maybe next time you complete a 100wc you could try to use some speech marks; this will make your writing even better than it already is!