Oh Rayyan, this is such a dreadfully sad tale! You have used the narrator’s voice and thoughts really well to draw me into your writing and feel empathy for you. Then/than : what’s the difference?
Mrs M
Rayyan,
Your piece is gripping at my heart. I feel such pain for the narrator. Sad to think that for some monsters are real and not just the stuff of fairy tales. Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Oh Rayyan, this is such a dreadfully sad tale! You have used the narrator’s voice and thoughts really well to draw me into your writing and feel empathy for you. Then/than : what’s the difference?
Mrs M
Rayyan,
Your piece is gripping at my heart. I feel such pain for the narrator. Sad to think that for some monsters are real and not just the stuff of fairy tales. Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA