Hi Yukta,
Wow! What a cliffhanger! I love the way you used descriptive detail to paint a picture in my mind and thoughts to make me really feel as if I was there.
Well done.
Mrs M
Yukta, I too love the imagery in this piece. I wonder though if you could have avoided using the word ‘pathway’ twice. Perhaps trail or avenue … what do you think? I do like the ellipsis at the end that allows my mind to wander.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand
Hi Yukta,
Wow! What a cliffhanger! I love the way you used descriptive detail to paint a picture in my mind and thoughts to make me really feel as if I was there.
Well done.
Mrs M
Yukta, I too love the imagery in this piece. I wonder though if you could have avoided using the word ‘pathway’ twice. Perhaps trail or avenue … what do you think? I do like the ellipsis at the end that allows my mind to wander.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand