Hi Mehwish,
You’ve done a great job of retelling the story of the Ramadan Lantern and used some lovely language. Now you need to organise your work into paragraphs; if you change the place or time , start a new paragraph. Mrs M
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Hi Mehwish,
You’ve done a great job of retelling the story of the Ramadan Lantern and used some lovely language. Now you need to organise your work into paragraphs; if you change the place or time , start a new paragraph.
Mrs M