The Grave by Oliver S

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1 Response to The Grave by Oliver S

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Oliver,

    Wow! What a scary response to this week’s prompt. You made excellent use of short sentences to convey emotion and left me wanting to know more; this is something talented writer’s do. I can also see that you’ve really worked hard at your punctuation this week, well done.

    Keep up the great work Oliver.

    Mrs M

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