Wow! What a scary response to this week’s prompt. You made excellent use of short sentences to convey emotion and left me wanting to know more; this is something talented writer’s do. I can also see that you’ve really worked hard at your punctuation this week, well done.
Hi Oliver,
Wow! What a scary response to this week’s prompt. You made excellent use of short sentences to convey emotion and left me wanting to know more; this is something talented writer’s do. I can also see that you’ve really worked hard at your punctuation this week, well done.
Keep up the great work Oliver.
Mrs M