The scary myth

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2 Responses to The scary myth

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Anojan,

    I really enjoyed reading your piece this week. I love they way you chose to tell the tale of a myth, it reminded me of some stories I’ve heard people tell before. My only piece of advice would be to check your tenses.

    Keep up the great work.

    Mrs M

  2. Sandrine says:

    What a myth! Well done with your description, it made it very real for me. Just check that your tenses all make sense. Well done on a great story!

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