Hi Anojan,
I really enjoyed reading your piece this week. I love they way you chose to tell the tale of a myth, it reminded me of some stories I’ve heard people tell before. My only piece of advice would be to check your tenses.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
What a myth! Well done with your description, it made it very real for me. Just check that your tenses all make sense. Well done on a great story!
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Hi Anojan,
I really enjoyed reading your piece this week. I love they way you chose to tell the tale of a myth, it reminded me of some stories I’ve heard people tell before. My only piece of advice would be to check your tenses.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
What a myth! Well done with your description, it made it very real for me. Just check that your tenses all make sense. Well done on a great story!