Wow Rohan , lots of exciting detail in your story, I was really worried for the 3 of you, I hope you got back safely. Next time remember to check your punctuation so it is easier for your reader to follow.
Hi Rohan, I really enjoyed reading your story. It was full of adventure and mystery. I wonder if you could re-read it and check for capital letters and any errors as this would help the reader. Well done!
Wow Rohan , lots of exciting detail in your story, I was really worried for the 3 of you, I hope you got back safely. Next time remember to check your punctuation so it is easier for your reader to follow.
Good choice of words Rohan. As I read your story, I shared in your fear. Keep up the story writing.
Hi Rohan, I really enjoyed reading your story. It was full of adventure and mystery. I wonder if you could re-read it and check for capital letters and any errors as this would help the reader. Well done!
thank you for response lisa