Hi Robert,
That sounds like a fun camping trip, especially the bit about the marshmallows! You’ve done a great job describing the trip and used some nice vocabulary.
Well done.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin
Hi Robert
Yes we’ve all had so much time inside that it’s good to read a 100 word challenge that has us outside for a change. You have described the camping trip very well and I love the detail of how long it took to put up the tents as you were inexperienced at doing it. You really described the scene very well and it allowed me to have a picture in my mind of the marshmallows roasting and the blue sky the following morning. I bet the scurrying racoon got a fright when it saw the campers. Well done! Excellent 100 word challenge.
Máire O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
Galway, Ireland
Hi Robert,
That sounds like a fun camping trip, especially the bit about the marshmallows! You’ve done a great job describing the trip and used some nice vocabulary.
Well done.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin
Hi Robert
Yes we’ve all had so much time inside that it’s good to read a 100 word challenge that has us outside for a change. You have described the camping trip very well and I love the detail of how long it took to put up the tents as you were inexperienced at doing it. You really described the scene very well and it allowed me to have a picture in my mind of the marshmallows roasting and the blue sky the following morning. I bet the scurrying racoon got a fright when it saw the campers. Well done! Excellent 100 word challenge.
Máire O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
Galway, Ireland