Kia ora Yukta,
This is a beautiful descriptive piece of writing; if I close my eyes I’m transported to this magical setting you’ve created. Not sure you needed those brackets.
Keep on writing.
Team 100 Aucklang New Zealand
Hope you’re doing well.
Another beautiful piece of descriptive writing , with some idyllic imagery to draw in your reader
. Think about your sentence structure, some need extending.
I want to know what happens next.
Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *