The Magical Garden By Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar 6A

2 Responses to The Magical Garden By Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar 6A

1. Mrs Suzanne Hutchinson Team 100 Auckland , New Zealand says:

   May 22, 2020 at 6:48 pm

   Kia ora Yukta,
   This is a beautiful descriptive piece of writing; if I close my eyes I’m transported to this magical setting you’ve created. Not sure you needed those brackets.
   Keep on writing.
   Mrs Hutchinson
   Team 100 Aucklang New Zealand

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2. nanand says:

   May 22, 2020 at 6:52 pm

   Hi Yukta,

   Hope you’re doing well.
   Another beautiful piece of descriptive writing , with some idyllic imagery to draw in your reader
   . Think about your sentence structure, some need extending.
   I want to know what happens next.
   Mrs M

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