This was a great read and your best entry to the challenge yet. I loved your use of the phrase ‘every nook and cranny’, it really helped me to picture the tomb in my mind. I think you’ve missed out a word before ‘surrounded’. Go back and read it through.
Mrs M
Hi Brindan
This was a great read and your best entry to the challenge yet. I loved your use of the phrase ‘every nook and cranny’, it really helped me to picture the tomb in my mind. I think you’ve missed out a word before ‘surrounded’. Go back and read it through.
Mrs M