Hi Rayyan,
This is another exciting read and you seem to have found yourself in another dire situation. You made great use of short sentences to build the excitement. You might want to look over your punctuation.
Mrs M
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Hi Rayyan,
This is another exciting read and you seem to have found yourself in another dire situation. You made great use of short sentences to build the excitement. You might want to look over your punctuation.
Mrs M