Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Yukta. Your choice of precise vocabulary made it easy for me to visualise your story. You left me wondering what the elephant said in his speech. It would be worth developing this idea into a longer text. I commend you on your punctuation. I enjoyed reading your writing this week. Thank you.
Hello Yukta,
I enjoyed reading your story about the talking elephant and imagining him zooming in from out of nowhere! I also loved the idea of him bowing to everyone after delivering his speech.
Well done!
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Yukta. Your choice of precise vocabulary made it easy for me to visualise your story. You left me wondering what the elephant said in his speech. It would be worth developing this idea into a longer text. I commend you on your punctuation. I enjoyed reading your writing this week. Thank you.
Hello Yukta,
I enjoyed reading your story about the talking elephant and imagining him zooming in from out of nowhere! I also loved the idea of him bowing to everyone after delivering his speech.
Well done!
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia