Hi Jitendar,
This was a great first entry into the 100 Word Challenge; you made great use of descriptive devices to paint a picture in my mind’s eye of your hidden world. Was/were- what are the rules?
Mrs M
Hello Jitendar, your descriptions are really good in this story. You have provided lots of detail to paint a picture for the reader. You have also used some great words like: picturesque, complex, astonished, crystal-clear, and glittering. This helped engage me in your story. Well done.
Hi Jitendar,
This was a great first entry into the 100 Word Challenge; you made great use of descriptive devices to paint a picture in my mind’s eye of your hidden world. Was/were- what are the rules?
Mrs M
Hello Jitendar, your descriptions are really good in this story. You have provided lots of detail to paint a picture for the reader. You have also used some great words like: picturesque, complex, astonished, crystal-clear, and glittering. This helped engage me in your story. Well done.