Hi Yukta
Well done including all 5 prompt words in your 100WC. Your recount about your trip to the zoo was well written and interesting to read. Fantastic.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Hi Yukta,
Good job using all 5 prompt words in your story. Your use of details was great and really helped me to picture your trip. Keep up the amazing work.
Hello Yukta, you were very clever how you used the challenge words. I liked how you included so much detail to paint a picture for us. I particularly liked how you provided the details about the special flower and your description of the lion. Well done.
What a lovely day at the zoo! I really enjoyed your writing:-)
Hi Yukta
Well done including all 5 prompt words in your 100WC. Your recount about your trip to the zoo was well written and interesting to read. Fantastic.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Hi Yukta,
Good job using all 5 prompt words in your story. Your use of details was great and really helped me to picture your trip. Keep up the amazing work.
Hello Yukta, you were very clever how you used the challenge words. I liked how you included so much detail to paint a picture for us. I particularly liked how you provided the details about the special flower and your description of the lion. Well done.