Hi Hidit
What a refreshing change to read some poetry as a 100WC. It isn’t easy to write verse and you have done a great job. Well done.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Wow! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is a different way to tell a story but your juxtaposition of words (how you pair them together) was very descriptive, especially the “sour debris” as it mixed two senses. The thought of tasting debris and even more so if it was sour just makes me cringe, and making someone experience your writing is a wonderful thing.
Hi Hidit,
This was a great poem, and a very unique 100WC. I really enjoyed your use of adjectives, especially “bitter rain” and “sour debris” as this created a strong mood and helped me to picture the scene. Amazing job, keep writing such unique and descriptive stories.
Hello Hidit, I’ve read the other comments on your blog and agree with all the comments. I really like poetry and enjoy writing verse and playing with language too, so keep at it. It is such a powerful and creative way to express your thoughts and ideas. Well done.
Hi Hidit
What a refreshing change to read some poetry as a 100WC. It isn’t easy to write verse and you have done a great job. Well done.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Wow! I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is a different way to tell a story but your juxtaposition of words (how you pair them together) was very descriptive, especially the “sour debris” as it mixed two senses. The thought of tasting debris and even more so if it was sour just makes me cringe, and making someone experience your writing is a wonderful thing.
Hi Hidit,
This was a great poem, and a very unique 100WC. I really enjoyed your use of adjectives, especially “bitter rain” and “sour debris” as this created a strong mood and helped me to picture the scene. Amazing job, keep writing such unique and descriptive stories.
Hello Hidit, I’ve read the other comments on your blog and agree with all the comments. I really like poetry and enjoy writing verse and playing with language too, so keep at it. It is such a powerful and creative way to express your thoughts and ideas. Well done.