Well done, Amina. You have worked hard to create a good account of the many emotions of Christmas morning! Be careful not to confuse ‘their’ and ‘there’. The first one is when something belongs to someone and the second is a place. They are homophones – they sound the same but have different meanings!
I hope you have a lovely Christmas and come back in 2015 with lots of great writing.
Hi Amina ,
Great work your story was amazing. I had a picture in my mind the moment I read your story. Your story was very good you used lots of emotion in your story about Christmas and have worked very hard. I loved your descriptive language. Well done Amina the greatest writer in the world.
Well done, Amina. You have worked hard to create a good account of the many emotions of Christmas morning! Be careful not to confuse ‘their’ and ‘there’. The first one is when something belongs to someone and the second is a place. They are homophones – they sound the same but have different meanings!
I hope you have a lovely Christmas and come back in 2015 with lots of great writing.
Thank you Mr Hyde have a lovely Christmas too
Hi Amina ,
Great work your story was amazing. I had a picture in my mind the moment I read your story. Your story was very good you used lots of emotion in your story about Christmas and have worked very hard. I loved your descriptive language. Well done Amina the greatest writer in the world.
From your best friend Romasa Munir
thank you romasa
next time I will improve some more on my story.