Hi I liked when you decried the red figure you saw.
good work Safwan, slowly and sometimes quickly your writing improves and thats great. I loved your description and keep up the good work.:p
This is great Safwan, I love how you used descriptive language to paint a picture in my mind and create a mood for your story and then use questions to draw me into your story further, remember to punctuate them. Miss A
wow safwan you made me think that you would disappear but it was a surprise party
I like your description but you need to check your grammer
I liked that you used similes and adjectives your story was amazing but next time use some metaphors
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I liked when you decried the red figure you saw.
good work Safwan, slowly and sometimes quickly your writing improves and thats great. I loved your description and keep up the good work.:p
This is great Safwan, I love how you used descriptive language to paint a picture in my mind and create a mood for your story and then use questions to draw me into your story further, remember to punctuate them.
Miss A
wow safwan you made me think that you would disappear but it was a surprise party
I like your description but you need to check your grammer
I liked that you used similes and adjectives your story was amazing but next time use some metaphors