This is a fabulous story, Abhinav. I don’t think it’s ever occurred to me before that Santa’s journey is actuall quite dangerous and that he might well feel nervous. And it was a super twist to make him his father’s successor. I’ll definitely see Santa in a diffeent light from now on. You’ve described the scene beautifully and punctuated it well. Congratulations!
This is a fabulous story, Abhinav. I don’t think it’s ever occurred to me before that Santa’s journey is actuall quite dangerous and that he might well feel nervous. And it was a super twist to make him his father’s successor. I’ll definitely see Santa in a diffeent light from now on. You’ve described the scene beautifully and punctuated it well. Congratulations!
good story Abhinav
I loved the vocabulary you used and also the adjectives
Very descriptive with good sentence structure. This made us feel we were on your journey with Santa. You used excellent punctuation in your writing