I really liked how you used capital letters for those words. I was so curious what his present was. Next time try not to start most of your sentences with Santa-Claus, such as this person called Santa-Clause………. Rhia, 5H.
Very good description in such a small piece of writing. I really like the ending sentence. It was really fun reading it.
From Leyana
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I really liked how you used capital letters for those words. I was so curious what his present was. Next time try not to start most of your sentences with Santa-Claus, such as this person called Santa-Clause……….
Rhia,
5H.
Very good description in such a small piece of writing. I really like the ending sentence. It was really fun reading it.
From Leyana