Sachien Week 15 100 WC

2 Responses to Sachien Week 15 100 WC

1. Ms. Ferri says:

   January 8, 2015 at 4:18 pm

   Sachien,

   I like that you wrote this with a date from the past. I thought it was a very interesting way to answer the prompt. I like how you made the story a cliffhanger where the readers did not know what was going to happen to the captain. Keep up the hard work.

   Ms. Ferri
   100WC Team

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2. Gharish says:

   January 14, 2015 at 7:30 pm

   I like how you ended the story with a question so the reader would wan’t to know more.

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