Hi Surabhi
You have a great imagination.
I really enjoy the use of fingerprints to open the secret door.
Your use of words is “magical”…dark gloomy cave…secret magical passageway.
Make sure you read your story before finishing. Read it through again now and see if you can see the repetition.
Keep up the good stories.
Well done Surabhi.
Hi Surabhi
You have a great imagination.
I really enjoy the use of fingerprints to open the secret door.
Your use of words is “magical”…dark gloomy cave…secret magical passageway.
Make sure you read your story before finishing. Read it through again now and see if you can see the repetition.
Keep up the good stories.
Well done Surabhi.