Well done Ithman, I can see you have worked hard to include lots of descriptive detail in your story, he certainly sounds like quite a scary robber! Next time make sure you check your work before you publish to see if you have any errors.
Keep rising to the challenge.
Miss A
London
Excellent effort Ithmam! You used some truly wonderful vocabulary words such as huongous and phantom. I would recommend that you go back and try reading your story aloud to hear where your punctuation needs to be. Good punctuation makes it easier for your audience to read your wonderful work.
Well done Ithman, I can see you have worked hard to include lots of descriptive detail in your story, he certainly sounds like quite a scary robber! Next time make sure you check your work before you publish to see if you have any errors.
Keep rising to the challenge.
Miss A
London
Excellent effort Ithmam! You used some truly wonderful vocabulary words such as huongous and phantom. I would recommend that you go back and try reading your story aloud to hear where your punctuation needs to be. Good punctuation makes it easier for your audience to read your wonderful work.