Krish this is a lovely story with some great creation of tension. You really have a natural story telling voice. What a shame it does not reflect the prompt this week so I cannot enter you in the challenge.
Miss A
Hello Krish,
Great to see you writing such amazing stories, you left me a question at the end,
I wonder how they came and why it said no entry!
Keep the hard work up,
your doing well!!!!
Krish this is a lovely story with some great creation of tension. You really have a natural story telling voice. What a shame it does not reflect the prompt this week so I cannot enter you in the challenge.
Miss A
It is very good
It is very good story
hahahahhahahahahahahahh well done krish
hhhhhhhhhhhhhh well done krish
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wow, a great story, have you made part three because is very interesting!
James 5A
Wow I’m astonish Krish
well done Krish I like your story by j2e club
wow that is so cool please make part 3!!!!!!!!
THANKS EVERYONE
I love the scary zombie army and the monstrous mummy attacks. Do Squid and Stampy survive? I would like to find out.
cool story krish , it hooked me in
Hello Krish,
Great to see you writing such amazing stories, you left me a question at the end,
I wonder how they came and why it said no entry!
Keep the hard work up,
your doing well!!!!
From Somran 🙂
It was very exciting to read. Richard from mead primary school
Amazing story. It was good but can you please put more adjectives.
Amazing story. It was good but can you please put more adjectives.
From Callum,from mead school.
a BIG thanks to the readers of my story. please check part 3, 4 and 5. I REALLY hope you enjoy reading.