Hello Irina,
You wrote a heartwarming story about the puppy who was found on such a dark, wet night. I appreciated how you described the setting for your story. The reason that Jack named the puppy was interesting and helped us see little “Wolf” I liked how it ended with the puppy and his new friend having fun together.
Irene
well done for creating a image but you could add more adjectives
Hello Irina,
You wrote a heartwarming story about the puppy who was found on such a dark, wet night. I appreciated how you described the setting for your story. The reason that Jack named the puppy was interesting and helped us see little “Wolf” I liked how it ended with the puppy and his new friend having fun together.
Irene