Wow Prithikaa! What an exciting story, I wonder how you adjusted to your new life. I love all the descriptive detail that you used. Next time try to vary your sentence structures to create effects.
Miss A
What an exciting description- your language really conveys a sense of excitement!
If you have time, please take a look at our year 4 story ideas blogs- Paris and Madrid. We are trying out ideas for story plans, and character descriptions.
Here is a link, check with your teacher first though! http://mead-primary-school.j2webby.com/?cat=9
Wow Prithikaa! What an exciting story, I wonder how you adjusted to your new life. I love all the descriptive detail that you used. Next time try to vary your sentence structures to create effects.
Miss A
Ok Miss Anand,
I will try next time 🙂
What an exciting description- your language really conveys a sense of excitement!
If you have time, please take a look at our year 4 story ideas blogs- Paris and Madrid. We are trying out ideas for story plans, and character descriptions.
Here is a link, check with your teacher first though!
http://mead-primary-school.j2webby.com/?cat=9
Mrs Coop, Mead