Very dramatic! Some missing full stops though. You need to read through and check.
Wow, I was intrigued in your amazing mine craft dream story. And I like how you said the stuff you were mad at, in CAPS!!!!! Remember your punctuation & commas.
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Very dramatic! Some missing full stops though. You need to read through and check.
Wow,
I was intrigued in your amazing mine craft dream story. And I like how you said the stuff you were mad at, in CAPS!!!!!
Remember your punctuation & commas.