Nice effort here, some good ideas. You now need to focus on your spelling of your words. Punctuation is also vital as you have missed out capital letters and full stops.
Nice story its cool , keep up the good work.
Nice story its cool , hope to here more stories.
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Nice effort here, some good ideas. You now need to focus on your spelling of your words. Punctuation is also vital as you have missed out capital letters and full stops.
Nice story its cool , keep up the good work.
Nice story its cool , hope to here more stories.