I like your work but you only wrote a little bit you did not put a full-stop and you missed AS in firework are colorful like rainbow. Plus check how you wrote colorful.
There are a few mistakes you made such as : you did not put a full-stop ,you missed AS in firework are colorful like rainbow. Plus check how you wrote colorful.
I like your work but you only wrote a little bit you did not put a full-stop and you missed AS in firework are colorful like rainbow. Plus check how you wrote colorful.
There are a few mistakes you made such as : you did not put a full-stop ,you missed AS in firework are colorful like rainbow. Plus check how you wrote colorful.