friends by Hamisha

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2 Responses to friends by Hamisha

  1. Amy leigh kerr says:

    I loved your poem.The thing I would change is the style of the writing.from Amy Leigh Kerr from year 6 Mexico city.

  2. Esha says:

    Great Work.
    I love your poem and how you made your words rhyme.
    And how you used your friends name on the last verse.
    Keep up the good work.

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