Brilliant work Sara. You really hooked me in and grabbed my attention because your monologue made your story on track. It was so interesting! You are such a great writer. I do not know how you write so great with interesting vocabulary. Keep it up and make me always hooked!
Good use of language and imagination. The story conjures up many vivid images to the reader. An excellent piece of writing.
Thank You Very Much.
Brilliant work Sara. You really hooked me in and grabbed my attention because your monologue made your story on track. It was so interesting! You are such a great writer. I do not know how you write so great with interesting vocabulary. Keep it up and make me always hooked!
Ratheena 🙂
Thanks Ratheena, for commenting on my work.
From Sara