Janna be careful with your sentences, read properly before submitting your stories. Well done Janna
Janna this is very interesting story, you used good imagination .Always check your work and read it properly before you hand it in .
thanks mum,thank you and hazeeb for telling me about the mistakes.i didn’t notice
that is totally weird, a flying ball with wings!?! keep up the good work!
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Janna be careful with your sentences, read properly before submitting your stories. Well done Janna
Janna this is very interesting story, you used good imagination .Always check your work and read it properly before you hand it in .
thanks mum,thank you and hazeeb for telling me about the mistakes.i didn’t notice
that is totally weird, a flying ball with wings!?! keep up the good work!