What an exciting piece of writing, Hamza! You have made everything seem very real by describing your thoughts – just reading it made me feel like panicking, too!
Don’t forget to use capital letters at the start of sentences.
Keep up the great work!
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What an exciting piece of writing, Hamza! You have made everything seem very real by describing your thoughts – just reading it made me feel like panicking, too!
Don’t forget to use capital letters at the start of sentences.
Keep up the great work!