What a sad story, Layla.I liked the short sentences at the end of your story. It added impact .You made good use of a variety of sentence openers. Well
thank you very much .
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What a sad story, Layla.I liked the short sentences at the end of your story. It added impact .You made good use of a variety of sentence openers. Well
thank you very much .