The horse of rainbows by Zohaib

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One Response to The horse of rainbows by Zohaib

  1. nanand says:

    Zobi there are some really great elements of a strong story through your fab description but your lack of punctuation makes this really difficult to read. Remember to read your work aloud before you publish.
    Miss A

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