Oh my goodness, what a lucky girl Dawn is, imagine how excited you would be if you had found all those jewels.
Remember to think about different ways to pull your reader into your story.
Miss A
Thank you Miss Anand,
it took me a long time to figure out what Dawn would find in those places.Next time I’ll try and think of a great way to pull the reader into my stories
Oh my goodness, what a lucky girl Dawn is, imagine how excited you would be if you had found all those jewels.
Remember to think about different ways to pull your reader into your story.
Miss A
Thank you Miss Anand,
it took me a long time to figure out what Dawn would find in those places.Next time I’ll try and think of a great way to pull the reader into my stories